Page 6
Technically I’ve already posted a page (the chapter title page). And technically this will be page 6 of an eventual published book.
But basically, here’s page one of Phobos and Deimos.
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Panel 1: Maida is writing a poem. The poem says: "Pink mud after the thaw. Orange clouds around the sun. Golden light from warm tunnels. Pink, Orange, Gold, My home." Maida's voice-over: "Sigh. That's not actually very good."
Panel 2: Maida is wearing a red head-scarf and a blue school uniform. She's in a classroom surrounded by other girls with identical uniforms and various head-coverings. Mrs. Wu (off-camera): "Kilwa? Miss Kilwa. I asked you a question." Maida: "Yes, Miss." Mrs. Wu: "No, the answer is 'No, Miss.'"
Panel 3: Mrs. Wu (dressed like a nun): "...Julius Caesar's assassination did not bring back the Roman republic. Miss Kilwa, you've bin on this planet, what, for two monfs? I fink it's high time you took a interest in our 'istory."
Panel 4: Maida: "Yes, Miss."
Panel 2: Maida is wearing a red head-scarf and a blue school uniform. She's in a classroom surrounded by other girls with identical uniforms and various head-coverings. Mrs. Wu (off-camera): "Kilwa? Miss Kilwa. I asked you a question." Maida: "Yes, Miss." Mrs. Wu: "No, the answer is 'No, Miss.'"
Panel 3: Mrs. Wu (dressed like a nun): "...Julius Caesar's assassination did not bring back the Roman republic. Miss Kilwa, you've bin on this planet, what, for two monfs? I fink it's high time you took a interest in our 'istory."
Panel 4: Maida: "Yes, Miss."
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